THIS IS BEING REWRITTEN SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENCE BUT IT CAN BE SO MUCH BETTER AND I WILL PROCEED TO DO SO.
Will be posted under a new name, "The Silence" :)
Wow. This is good. I just noticed this story whilst roaming your profile.
I like the third point of view. In the last bit, it's Jared's part, right? I kinda did a giggle ru-ru for no reason, but I found it kind of funny. And wow, three dead inmates. Hmmm, makes you think. I totally want to learn more about this cannibalistic virus.
Nonetheless, I like this. It's so...different, I've never read anything about cannibalism, so I'm excited to do so now! Makes me think of Hannibal a bit, but that's way out of the box. Anyways, I'll carry on with this splendid reading later, since I have to go to bed.
Goodnight, and good day!
- Lola Lovise ♥