The Lost and the Confused

The Lost and the Confused

643 Reads 18 Votes 1 Part Story
J. By J020163 Completed

Rachel Devlin is an only child born into a family with an abusive father. One day the abuse she constantly see's and feels day in and day out becomes to much; so she runs away.
She finds herself in an unknown part of the world, lost and confused with only a stranger to help her.

Soa_Soraya Soa_Soraya May 15, 2011
This is a phenomenal story, short but very good :) 
                              The only spelling error I caught was near the beginning where you have 'freinds' rather than 'friends' but that's the only constructive/helpful thing n_n;
                              Loved it! Please keep up the amazing work! :D 
sillyrandomgirl sillyrandomgirl Jan 23, 2011
Aw I thought this was soooo cute yet a little sad. I love your type of writing nd of course this story.
Aloujay Aloujay Oct 14, 2010
WOW! It's so emotional and really descriptive...I love it :) and at least it had a happy ending ^_^
Dragonz_Rule Dragonz_Rule Oct 14, 2010
God this is the type of story that leaves the reader making their own ending... I LOVE IT!!
                              
                              if anyone has any stories or knows any stories similar to this one, cn u let me know??
                              thnx heaps!! Cyaa's!!
Earthbounded Earthbounded Sep 25, 2010
That's really sweet. :)
                              
                              OH....and I really like your profile picture. Amu and Utau!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                              
                              
J020163 J020163 Sep 18, 2010
thnx so much :)
                              everyone for the support that has been given to me.
                              ^_^