Call me Jes

Call me Jes

575 Reads 19 Votes 5 Part Story
Al Ingranazzio By AlIngranazzio Updated May 07, 2015

I live on enormous wasteland. There is just one such outside our city. I
like my house it's like two sewer pipes joined together though. I paid for its
design and it's quite modern inside: lamp, mirror, tap with washbasin, sliding
shelf on every wall. Why?

VictorJacob9 VictorJacob9 Oct 26, 2015
This is very intriguing. I'll admit that the "accent" of the piece threw me at first, but I'm getting used to it.
BreannaAmber BreannaAmber Mar 18, 2015
It's different and captivating. To develop a proper opinion I'll have to read more but off to a great start.
BenAVanguarde BenAVanguarde Feb 12, 2015
It is good that you ended with the cliff hanger of a quirk, why did you want him to stay?  Turn the page.
TheChillMaster TheChillMaster Feb 11, 2015
Really interesting and very different start. Am looking forward to seeing how the story develops.
AlIngranazzio AlIngranazzio Feb 09, 2015
Thank you very much for your comment. If you ask I will read with pleasure something of yours.
JaMoscat JaMoscat Feb 09, 2015
I am intrigued by what's to come next and wondering why someone would pay a stranger to stay at his house.