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The Demon Child (Currently editing)

The Demon Child (Currently editing)

53.9K Reads 2.5K Votes 23 Part Story
Janae By berryexplosion Completed

It's my sixth birthday today ; I'm surrounded by a bunch of adults I don't know and don't like.  I want to get rid of them. They don't know what I am or what I can do. Not even my parents know; I plan to keep it that one suspects the child.

Obviously, it's inspired by Lucius; please don't comment obvious things like "this is like Lucius." because it's already been established. Thank you. 

The ones that say 'edited' are not; I'm putting all the edited ones up soon. Keep in mind this story was written three years ago.

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_NaniBaby _NaniBaby Apr 17, 2016
Aww all she wants to do is go home to her daughter but she's gonna die 😔
writingals writingals Feb 02
This just like a perfect story tnx for this story who ever made this
swtlovekiss swtlovekiss Mar 23, 2013
Same thing here, you keep jumping tenses or adding extra letters in. Also in most of these sentences you are missing punctuation.
                              I do like the story though, it is rather short chapters but with that it makes you want to keep reading!