14 Part Story 3.1K Reads 81 Votes
Alba :) By Tigerchick Updated 2 years ago
Kami was a normal 15 year old African, living with her 2 siblings and her best friend. But an unfortunate event changed her life forever. 
    White people came into her village, and taking her people captive, along with her. Will she be able to survive what is ahead of her? 
    Read to find out.
@Tigerchick Welcome! And I'm glad you're not one of those people who say, "I've read your story. You suck suck suck suck suck suck suck suck suck... etc."
                                    -___-" What the heck is with /that/?!?!
                                    At least I tell people why I don't like their stuff x)
It's fine, but needs improvement :)
                                    More details, longer story, perhaps? :D
                                    Not trying to insult, but give constructive criticism...
                                    I'm always bad at that :[