Forbidden

Forbidden

149K Reads 4K Votes 58 Part Story
southernbelleky By southernbelleky Completed

Katie has the perfect life. She's popular and girls envy her. Her dad is a rich and successful lawyer. She has the popular jock boyfriend named Jake, but he just doesn't make her happy. When she meets a new young lawyer named Adam who works for her father everything changes. She's immediately drawn to Adam. Adam feels the same about Katie, but they're both worried about what her parents will do if they find out. After all Katie is just a 17 year old girl and Adam is a grown man. What will happen once her parents find out? This story is called Forbidden for a reason.

Hi, could you please start conversation with different characters on a different paragraph. It's confusing having to read conversation Of different characters in one sentence.
AndreaAfricaa AndreaAfricaa Apr 18, 2016
Duude theres no spaces and paragraphs it was so confusing to read and yeah like she said^ it went really fast
HimaniRaval HimaniRaval May 05, 2016
Not to sound bratty.... but could the author please just skip to next line after someone's speech is over in a conversation. It's very hard to keep up with so many inverted command that I thought it was Adam saying some of the lines.
                              
                              
                              Thank you. See what I did there?
hellohellohello192 hellohellohello192 Jun 06, 2016
Yes please... It went really fast... Please put some spaces and paragraphs pls!! The story is great!!
wait is sleeping until 10 sleeping in cause i wake up at 3 pm still tired
ezrajnobaptiste ezrajnobaptiste Mar 24, 2015
so far so good but the use of paragraphs would make this book so much easier for your readers