Rap #1

Rap #1

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DurkNDope By DurkNDope Completed

There were times where I wasn't my mommas favorite kid, i done a lotta dumb shit that my sisters never did. she pushed me to stay in school, but I dropped out cause I had better shit to do, said I was gonna get my ged but i never followed through. just cause i was popular i said fuck a degree, now i look back thinkin what the fuck is wrong with me. mama always said I've had so much talent, but i said fuck that cause I never thought I had it. the only thing I knew was tryna roll with the big dogs, kept going even though I knew where i would end up. me and my sisters never got along, they was tryna look out for me but I swore they were wrong, parents were always alone cause every night i was gone, they stayed up all night thinking bout the shit I was on. I got a Lotta emotions but I just hide it, its hard for me so I just let my music try it. spent all my life thinkin no one would care if I died, but I remember all the times my parents stayed up and cried. had mixed feelings throughout t...

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You're very talented. I can tell this came from the heart. It would be greatly appreciated if you read my rap and give me feedback
rapflow rapflow Jan 20
I like this rap for you have a flow and your rhyme scheme is good.