Sin

Sin

45 Part Story 786K Reads 5.9K Votes
Shaun Allan By ShaunAllan Completed

Dead, dead, dead.  Say it enough times and it becomes just another word.
        
        What would you do? Could you kill a killer? Does the death of one appease the deaths of a hundred? What about that hundred against a thousand?
        
        What if you had no choice?
        
        Meet Sin. No, not that sort of sin, but Sin, crazy as a loon (you ask Sister Moon), and proud of it. Sin locks himself away in an asylum and, every so often, badboy he's believed to be, gets violent. That's only so they'll give him those nice drugs, though. The ones that help him forget.
        
        It's a pity they don't work.
        
        Sin, you see, has a serious problem. Well, it's not so much his problem, as ours - yours, mine and everyone else's. People die around Sin.  He doesn't like it and there's nothing he can do about it.  But someone else knows, and Sin has to stop them... and himself...
        
        Flip and catch...
        
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        You can read the sequel to Sin, Mortal Sin, if you enjoy his adventures, here:  https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/34816460-mortal-sin
        
        Sin is the #1 psychological thriller/urban fantasy that has been called "dark, disturbing and amazing" and has been compared to Dean Koontz, Stephen King and even Hitchcock!
        
        Shaun's writing has been described as "poetic" and has been known to make the reader laugh at the most unexpected moments of dread.
        
        Sin can be purchased in ebook and paperback from from Amazon and is also available in audiobook form, narrated by Grammy nominated R.D. Watson!
        
        Amazon: http://getbook.at/SinEbook
        
        Please enjoy.
        
        Read more about Shaun Allan and his work at http://www.shaunallan.co.uk, read his blog at http://flipandcatch.blogspot.com and find him on Facebook at http://www.facebook.com/singularityspoint
        
        He is also on Twitter: @singularityspnt
        
        Sin, himself, has a Twitter account: @SinNotSinful and a blog, his diary of a madman, at http://singularityspoint.blogspot.com

indigo_vibe indigo_vibe Jul 11, 2016 02:14AM
💜💜💜see this is why flow matters in writing. It makes the story 1000 times better than it already was. I love thisssss
MariaPenora MariaPenora Jul 17, 2016 07:01PM
Gosh dang, this is pretty long compared to mine.
                                    
                                    ~Hooked already
wrightstory wrightstory Jul 11, 2016 09:05AM
I love the fact that u changed it to show that the coin is the trigger and that the person is what makes this happen.  I can see a thread in your stories. Clever. :-)
ButImANugget ButImANugget Jul 17, 2016 01:26AM
I love the cast list. James McAvoy as Sin is just perfect 👌 Your writing is incredibly intriguing, it drew me into the story immediately!
wrightstory wrightstory Jul 11, 2016 09:07AM
I love that u show us that joy and her responsibility to deliver weighed even heavily on her than sin. Although joy had to carry the burden longer than sin before she snapped.
rdiamond89 rdiamond89 Jul 18, 2016 07:05AM
LOL so weird to see woolworths mentioned in something I'm reading.