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Emily By AfineMess Completed

"Sorry to break it to you, babe," he started as he wrapped his arms around my waist from behind, placing his lips by my ear, "But you were mine from the moment you said 'I do.'"

	You see, my life was perfectly some point: college, work, friends, living off of Ramen and Easy-Mac. It was the typical college life that I'm sure many people have lived.
	But there's one part of my life that only one in a million people have even imagined.
	When my pretty-much-forgotten father steps back into the picture, that was when my life took a nose dive to the seventh layer of my very own personal hell.
	This is the part of the story where I meet some people, old and new, get thrown into a twister of unsettling events, and end up locking lips with a guy that is severely hated from my side of the road. S'not that bad, right?

thecatsaysbloop thecatsaysbloop Jun 21, 2014
I would have sweared my way through the stitching haha I can't stand the idea of it xD
Chocolateyprincess Chocolateyprincess May 22, 2014
You're a fantastic writer!!! Your work has to more well-known. People really need to start reading it!!!
WhatIfNot WhatIfNot Feb 07, 2013
Awww, this is cute! I loved Sam's character, and the break-in was interesting. I'm definitely reading on. I don't have many complaints, just watch the "Yeah's" you put in front of sentences, I caught a few times when those could be weeded out. Otherwise, I loved this :) Great job!
AfineMess AfineMess Feb 05, 2013
@AnnaBelleLikes2Read Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. And clichés aren't how I roll, but hey, we all read one at least once in our lifetime, right? Haha :)
                              @cassius1291 Thank you! I'm glad you took the time to tell me what you think. ^-^
zhy_thewriter zhy_thewriter Feb 04, 2013
First off, I love sam! I think the plot of this story is really cool, thank god this isn't a cliche. :P
                              This was really descriptive. I think it had a great flow to it, and you did a good job catching my attention from the start.
                              I love your cover, btw. Great job! Voted!!!!!!!!!!!
AfineMess AfineMess Feb 01, 2013
Hah, thanks for all the comments, people! Really, thank you. Good or bad, all critiquing is very helpful and motivating for me. I appreciate the fact that you all took time to read some of my story and comment. It means a lot. So, again, thanks. :)