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peanutsandpumpkins By peanutsandpumpkins Updated Jun 05, 2015

"Ok see you tomorrow" you say to your friends as you walk the block to your house. When you get home it looks like your dad isn't home. 

'Yes this is my chance' you start to think. You have wanted your tongue in the sexy little c*nt of your mother's for so long and all you have been waiting for is a chance to get her alone. Where she can't pull out. And it looks like the perfect time by the sound of it. You walk to your room to get your toys and strip before you head to your mother's room. When you open the door you realize this is perfect. Your mother is laying on her bed eaglespread, with a vibrator on her cl*t and a hand wrist deep inside herself. She is moaning your name. As you walk in she doesn't notice you. Great. When you get to the end of the bed you get her attention.

"Well well well. What do we have here? It looks like you haven't been a very good girl lately mom." 

Your mother opens her eyes wide in shock. When you slide on the bed she starts to protest. She starts to tr...

peanutsandpumpkins peanutsandpumpkins Jun 10, 2015
@CALLmeSEN thank you for your advise. I love when people can help me make my stories better. feel free to give more advise in future stories or on the one I've already created.
CALLmeSEN CALLmeSEN Jun 05, 2015
I like where your going with it but maybe you should slow it down I know they are one shots but you should throw some action into that it just seemed a little rushed like you just wanted to get it over with... But I like the basis of it and u would like to see where you can take it