Am I Good Enough?

Am I Good Enough?

1 Part Story 8.7K Reads 391 Votes
Jordan H. By TheUltimateFatMan Completed

Dedicated to an amazingly talented Writer:  xoxoStardustxoxo
    
    A/N: I believe we all at one point or another ask ourselves these very questions.
    
    Am I Good Enough?
    
    Am I good enough for you?
    
    Would you help me through?
    
    Can You love me for me?
    
    Can you see what i want to be?
    
    Am I a good person full of love?
    
    Will my hatred take me down, instead of above?
    
    Can I find true happiness today?
    
    Will the sun shine for me, And make me stay?
    
    Am I good enough for you?
    
    Is it too late, to know what to do?
    
    Can I fix my mistakes, that swim in my head?
    
    Will I be remembered when I'm dead?
    
    Will my life matter at all?
    
    Can I inspire someone to stand tall?
    
    Am I good enough for my mom and dad?
    
    Will they always love me? Even when they're mad?
    
    Am I good enough for my friend?
    
    Will they still like me in the end?
    
    Am I good enough for myself?
    
    Am I good enough for you?
    
    Am I good enough?
    
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valiant_ valiant_ Apr 15, 2013 07:49PM
It's alright, but it's too straight forward. Give something to think about, give us CONTEXT so the readers can judge weather or not we think you're 'good enough'. Otherwise it just sounds like a rant that rhymes.
xXXovertureXXx xXXovertureXXx Apr 14, 2013 09:01PM
it seems like im reading about myself,the thoughts that go on in my head,love it <3
" Am I good enough for myself?" that single question has taken over me
Very understandable. I'm sure everyone has felt like this - These things floating through their minds.
Navy0511 Navy0511 Feb 03, 2013 12:06AM
I always ask myself does questions.  I really help to know I am not the only one.   I really liked it:)
GavinGeiger GavinGeiger Jan 19, 2013 02:48AM
truly amazing, for me it sort of reminds me about the struggles that we normally have in our live with god. anyways sounds awesome dude!