TheFabulousNightFury here with another story, cool right? Well this is HTTYD from Toothless's point of view.
I feel obliged to inform you that one, he will not stay away, and two, that yell to him just sounded like a high-pitched screech.
I love how in the beginning its like a dragon twist of what hiccup says
You should always capitalize the first letter of nouns, and it should be "name's." Also, try to use commas. This is a run on sentence which may get annoying. '-'
I don't know if your just saying dirty, but it's actually "sturdy" which means tall and firm