Feelings

Feelings

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Romaisa_Batool By Romaisa_Batool Completed

You held my hand in the dark 

You still hold

You're always there to hug me 

When i feel cold

I feel like i'm a new born baby and mother holds me 

I lie in your lap 

You kiss my forehead 

When I'm  taking a nap 

I never feel alone 

I never feel unhappy 

You always make me smile 

You always make my wish in reality

I never expect , i have that thing 

But  you never disappointed my wish 

I wish i could give you every happiness 

And remove all the sadness in your life 

I wish i was a magical stick 

And whatever your wish is

I'd present it to you as a gift 

For making my life complete 

You're  everthing for me 

I don't want anyone 

'Cause you completed my life 

  • ammarayounas
AliceMorris7 AliceMorris7 Oct 18, 2015
The last line brings the whole poem together really like this
Romaisa_Batool Romaisa_Batool Sep 05, 2015
@Dinobiteme I'm very glad .. n thanks for reading my collection
think_done think_done Apr 26, 2015
The Last Line ties it all so beautifully. ' Cause you completed my life' I love it!
misstmaria misstmaria Mar 23, 2015
what a heartfelt piece!  true, beautiful emotion. very much enjoyed :)