Chemical and Physical Changes (boyxboy)

Chemical and Physical Changes (boyxboy)

35.3K Reads 1.2K Votes 15 Part Story
Ande Marcum By xoandexo Completed

Max Carters is  the least popular kid in school. Zach Larson is the most popular guy in school. When they get paired to be partners on a Chemistry project They begin to fall for each other. Max's dad is a complete drunk. And when Max finds out things about him, he hates his dad even more. But did his dad actually do the things everyone says, or was it Max's so called dead mother?

EvanSinclair EvanSinclair Jul 12, 2016
I love your intro so much. I've recently been coming out to my church as lesbian, then as trans, and they've been so supportive!
RaultWatanabe RaultWatanabe Dec 14, 2016
Its ok to be gay if you're European or american but if you're asian you wiil regret it for life
DunkirkHazza DunkirkHazza Aug 17, 2016
Your moms always yelling and shouting, I'm sure everytime you're with her its like your at a screamo concert.
XxCuteOmegaPupXx XxCuteOmegaPupXx Nov 10, 2016
I'M COMMENTING BEFORE READING SO WHAT I WAS ABOUT TO SAY IS....I'M LEARNING CHEMICAL AND PHISICAL CHANGE THOUGH MY GRADE WAS A B+ BUT IT'S GETTING LOWER BECAUSE MY PARTNER IS NOT THERE!!😢😢😢😢 ANYWAY I'LL START READING!!😍😛
JJRC671 JJRC671 Nov 03, 2016
I like this line tbh ....it is really true ....I jst came out a year ago
smut_slut smut_slut Dec 04, 2016
I really like this storyline so far but I think you could improve by separating the text into smaller paragraphs and making sure all of the speech has speech marks because it gets quite confusing. Every time somebody else speaks it should be on a new line.