Iron Heart

Iron Heart

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Jamie Harris By words_are_weapons Updated Aug 08

It's a new year and Gauntlet finalist Codi James is back for round two. 
  
With her new position at the top ranked Battlecast Academy and with last year's victor no longer competing, it seems like the fates have aligned to give Codi a clear run at winning the tournament once and for all. Armed with state of the art equipment, a rigorous training schedule and a scholarship fund to let her focus on nothing but the Gauntlet all year round, she has one goal: first place.
  
But this year the game has changed. She's not the plucky underdog anymore. Codi has the weight of expectations on her shoulders, and there are those who view her leap to fame through jealous eyes. This year her battles won't be confined to the arena, and now she has everything to lose.
  
  [Sequel to The Gauntlet]

When people put punched the button or something like that,  I be thinking they literally punch the button.😂😂😂 I don't know why.
aechanmar aechanmar Apr 21, 2016
I really enjoy this descriptor, building on the already formidable mental picture of her. You can really start to see how truly spectacular she is.
I just hope it stays on the tournament course and not become some conspiracy...... Because it's going so well
aechanmar aechanmar Apr 21, 2016
I really like this fragment of the sentence, 'lifeblood of the urban colossus.' It helps lend to the huge differences in the Earth we know now and what it is in your world.
kylaxalyk kylaxalyk Sep 23, 2016
omg. this would be so awesome. i think i have the idea where is this going
I love setting the scene for large cities and you have done a fine job here. Succinct and well laid out, I have the place in my mind.