Silent Dreamer

Silent Dreamer

1.2K Reads 21 Votes 6 Part Story
Sarah By SARAH22 Updated Nov 01, 2010

A shy spainsh girl living in Hawaii longs to show not us a few people the real confident her but the whole world. This seem impossible until good looking Jay turns up on the scene. He boosts her self esteem and tells her how beautiful she is everyday. Over a long journey with up's and downs something special forms between the two 16 year olds.

arose13 arose13 Oct 11, 2011
I love it :) awesome start and i love the introduction to her character!!!
Tristachio Tristachio Aug 04, 2010
This this is the first installment, I have to say I'm alittle intrigued. The flow of the story is good (slightly choppy getting off to start) but despite that it's made me want to find out more and see how the story will start to pace along.
SARAH22 SARAH22 Aug 04, 2010
@CresentMoon Thank you I am uploading sooon and thank you for fanning me aswell :)
CresentMoon CresentMoon Aug 04, 2010
omg i love it thanks so much for telling me read the book and btw thx for fanning me too
SARAH22 SARAH22 Aug 03, 2010
@London_girl Heyy thanks so much for fanning!! :D and he the photo is the same colour hair and tan (maybe a little less) as a charcter who is coming into in the next cahpter which i am writing now :L :)
London_girl London_girl Aug 03, 2010
@SARAH22 i forgot i hadn't fan because when you did i was on my phone an couldn't lol :) and he's HWAATT and yeah i'll comment cause i really like it :)))