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Astronomicon: Boundary

Astronomicon: Boundary

3K Reads 193 Votes 1 Part Story
Paul Vincent By Astronomicon Completed

A couple walking exploring a remote beach make a bizarre discovery that shakes their world. This story is a possibly chilling view of the future, a fresh look at the consequences of our attempts to avoid death.

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mactheknife1313 mactheknife1313 Mar 19, 2017
Well that was just awful, I get all interested because it's such a good story, and POOF it's over after one chapter c'mon man don't leave me hangin
krisnai krisnai Nov 21, 2016
love your stories! original ideas and this one really sounds like it could happen in the future! or who knows maybe thats us now all in a sim.. i think this could potentially be a longer story/book even. so happy to have found your work!
- - Oct 04, 2015
Enjoyed this very much. Like reading a classic Asimov story. An idea well explored. Thanks.
kendale2003 kendale2003 Oct 14, 2014
Wow!! Imagine, how true that could be in the future. I think it's totally plausible...with the technology that is being kept secretive this day in age, I Can Absolutely Believe It!!!! 
                              @Astronomicon Awesome Story!!! 
                     really makes one think!!!
Astronomicon Astronomicon Aug 06, 2013
Thanks for the feedback. I really liked the last line - I thought it was a nice, subtle portent of doom. You think it still works without it?
RomanaDrew RomanaDrew Aug 06, 2013
I think it is a great story and well written.  Nice idea. I don't think you need the last sentence.