Just Three Little Words[EDITING]

Just Three Little Words[EDITING]

27 Part Story 19K Reads 194 Votes
Kacie By jellystar3409 Completed

Christian Anderson and Jocelyn Rhoads, two people that come from the same kind of seductive nature.
They realized that they had something special, but they happened to be very stubborn.
How far are they going to go to get the other to say it first? The "Phrase".
Whose going to be the first to crack?
To say 3 little words. 
"I Love You."
It's a love contest. What's the prize?

Antelucem Antelucem Jan 31, 2012 02:04AM
This is great but you might want to have some variety within your paragraphs. However, I'm intrigued :) and I think that the story's going to be awesome.
Whines8 Whines8 Jan 27, 2012 04:07AM
I always love romance humor. It's really fun to read I agree with castiefan though u need to have a little bit better descriptions. Just for the readers benefit :) love the story nonetheless voted
CastielFan CastielFan Jan 27, 2012 12:17AM
I'm not sure if gorgeouser is a word, but that doesn't matter. This was amazing. You could use a little bit more description, but otherwise, good work.
Lols! LOVE THE COVER. tHIS IS HILARIOUS! :ddd
                              
                              i LOVE THE PLOTS AND UR CHARACTERS ARE FUNNNNNNYY! *vooted* i CAN SEE THAT U REALLY HAVE POTENTIAL HERE.
minalovesmaine minalovesmaine Sep 07, 2011 12:52AM
This a great story! I think the cover you chose was really cute too, btw :) The dialogue was good, just try and not let it overpower the story. Great job, otherwise!
CandyJWords CandyJWords Jun 13, 2011 07:02PM
Wow. I'm knocked speechless too... :O 
                              I'm so on to the next chapter!!!!!!