Your always going to regret it.. That Forgotten part of yourself you decided to leave behind to start this grand new life.. Well Guess what It hasn't forgotten you.. And its time to pay up to owned dues...
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<3 I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS!!! It is very described and detailed, I want to read MORE!!! LOVE IT! GREAT JOB! <3
Hmmm I have no clue what's going to happen next lol. Revenge must definately. I don't know but I just love the way you write it's so.... it's so... Um I can't think of the word right now. But your writing just wants me to keep reading. Maybe the word is inviting??? Hmm anywho going to read next part
@little_rose Awe thank you I hope you stick around for the whole thing. Thanks for noticing the art and whatnot your awesome!
OH MY GOD voted and am putting it in my library just for the description and cover and am going to read it as soon as i get time! Awesome work you have definitely caught my attention!
can you read some of mine plz??