CAPTIVES

CAPTIVES

877 Reads 23 Votes 2 Part Story
katkrazy By katkrazy Updated Aug 01, 2010

Ivy has a dark secret, and has been a prisoner in a huge complex for over a year now. She is quickly losing hope of ever being free again. Will she be able to escape? Will she lose someone close to her in the process? Or will she be doomed, trapped in the cellars forever?

This is a really good story! Beautifully writing, and the ending line is definitely a leaving me wanting more! Please update!!
CantTouchThis25 CantTouchThis25 Jan 26, 2014
I really like your story! It's very well written and I hope you update soon! :)
isilee isilee May 02, 2013
That is really good! Hurry up and write more! I need to know what happens next!
AidaPup AidaPup Apr 30, 2013
I love this, you're a great writer!! I can imagine this being published some day. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
AidaPup AidaPup Apr 30, 2013
Wow, amazing writing. Great details and description, and I love the last line of this chapter - a great cliff hanger that leaves the reader wanting more. I'm looking forward to reading more!! (Really sorry to advertise, but maybe check out the books I'm writing? I'm not really well known on here.)
dancingowlscantalk dancingowlscantalk Mar 13, 2013
This story should have more votes I've read worse stories with thousands of votes.I really like it:-)