"You Are Mine Little Bird, and I Am Your Alpha"

"You Are Mine Little Bird, and I Am Your Alpha"

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Lynn By madz978mcc Updated May 22, 2015

As I made my way toward the auditorium, wearing my blue skinny jeans, black and white Nike's, and T-shirt saying "Shit Ain't Personal; Just Business", I noticed the future alpha of the pack staring me down. Ashton Fox. Like, a full on, heated glare. What have I done to him to make him stare? 
I just shoot him a look and keep walking.
And then he growls..
A chill runs down my spine, but I shake it off.
A split second later, my best friend Jackson bounds over and drapes his arm protectively around me, pulling me against him. The hell? 
Aware of Ashton's glaring, Jackson nuzzles my hair; a gesture that asks if I'm okay. I nod. 
I'm pretty sure that a second growl comes from Ashton's direction..
What is wrong with Ash these days? I used to be best fiends with him when we were younger. I miss the protective, possessive, fun-loving alpha boy from grade school. One time, in 4th grade, I fell on the pavement during a game of tag, and scraped my knee. Ashton ran over to me, scooped me up like I weighed nothing, and carried me----no ran me to the nurse....all the while trying to calm me down. I was crying my eyes out. 
He was in 6th grade then, but still..
I guess he grew up. Oh well...I shouldn't dwell. 
My sixteenth birthday is tomorrow, and that's when I'll officially be able to sense my mate...

BBBClub BBBClub Oct 24, 2016
And knew should be know so your keeping your tenses the same. Once again no criticism at all. You are a great writer!!!!
BBBClub BBBClub Oct 24, 2016
Maybe "....scraping my knee. Ashton....." breaking up the sentence so it's not a run on sentence.
BBBClub BBBClub Oct 24, 2016
Accidentally put a space between deal and the question mark 😋
BBBClub BBBClub Oct 24, 2016
You don't have to repeat him all you have to say is "What have I done to make him stare?" But do what you thinks best 😁
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Miss_Mad_hatter2 Miss_Mad_hatter2 Oct 07, 2016
That music was on point. It made me feel like I was watching a movie or tv show.