the prince of night wants me to be his bride and wont stop till he has me

the prince of night wants me to be his bride and wont stop till he has me

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Bleeding_lover By Bleeding_lover Updated Mar 07, 2013

this story is about a girl named ally, Ally is not ur typical type of girl though either is her family seh has no friends none at all things have always been hard on her though she has her family by her side its still hard for her mainly because she has the gift of a telopathity... yea i said that and you heard it.  But what happeneds when she meets a guy named cole that that say's he loves her, what happeneds when anouther guy also tells her the same thing wat will ally do... who will she choose and what will she do when her biggest fear comes true

Zoe_98 Zoe_98 Feb 26, 2013
Great plot!! I think if you neatened it up a little, add some punctuation, a little detail on surroundings and into paragraphs then this story would rock!!!
                              
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