Living With The Simons.

Living With The Simons.

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Shelby Rae. By shelbyrae77 Updated Oct 05, 2014

Alixa Cox, is your typical quiet girl. But what happens when reality hits her and her parents have died. Leaving behind her friends and moving in with The Simons. This is your normal, life of Aliza Cox. Aliza is 16 years of age, she has blonde hair blue eyes. Living with Simons isn't easy. Especially when she falls in love. But with who? Find out. (: Please comment and vote. :3 And read! :P.

TishaStoltz TishaStoltz Apr 27
You should like make the authors not where you start talking bold so that we know where the chapters end and where the talking from you began
zingzinga zingzinga Nov 25, 2012
Ok, so I'm starting to a get a My Life With The Walter Boys, Surviving the Anderson Brothers, etc. vibe here. Better descriptions though!
shelbyrae77 shelbyrae77 Nov 18, 2012
@Sentri I'm trying to set off emotions. As if she is strong. She's still kind of not used to it. Reality hasn't hit her.
shelbyrae77 shelbyrae77 Nov 18, 2012
@Millilitre I do agree, but I am trying to be as if she's still in shock. For me, if my parents were to die, I would want somewhere to stay, and then my emotions would probably get the best of me. Like maybe in a few chapters.
The_Romance_Writer The_Romance_Writer Nov 18, 2012
I agree that the chapter was short but it sees interesting. U might want to add a few more details with your dialogu but I think u have a good idea on your hands.