Burns

Burns

64K Reads 2.2K Votes 26 Part Story
Evilbacon1122 By Evilbacon1122 Completed

Becca was special.. Always was. She was short tempered and stubborn. Until she meets a god named Loki...... Then everything changes.

hopelessr0mance hopelessr0mance Mar 25, 2018
does the 1122 after you name mean you were born in November on the 22nd?
SarahLojo SarahLojo Apr 12, 2016
A transition seems to be lacking here.  What happened between Thor helping loki up and loki putting up a shield of some kind
Chyanne_Hiddlestoner Chyanne_Hiddlestoner Sep 20, 2018
This is amazing! One suggestion though. Maybe make the paragraphs a little shorter so it's easier to read and those less used to reading don't lose their flow. :)