Burns

Burns

60.8K Reads 2.2K Votes 26 Part Story
Evilbacon1122 By Evilbacon1122 Completed

Becca was special.. Always was. She was short tempered and stubborn. Until she meets a god named Loki...... Then everything changes.

does the 1122 after you name mean you were born in November on the 22nd?
SarahLojo SarahLojo Apr 12, 2016
A transition seems to be lacking here.  What happened between Thor helping loki up and loki putting up a shield of some kind
chyanne_way chyanne_way Sep 20
This is amazing! One suggestion though. Maybe make the paragraphs a little shorter so it's easier to read and those less used to reading don't lose their flow. :)