Under the Surface

Under the Surface

3.1K Reads 36 Votes 14 Part Story
Jordana Brady By TheUnknownGirl Updated Jun 29, 2011

Do you know what its like to live with no quite? With noise as your constant companion? Its horrifying. Nothing can block it out. Not music, not reading, not talking. It's always there. In my head. 
I never knew I'd hate being 14 so much.

TheUnknownGirl TheUnknownGirl Mar 23, 2011
@Victoria_Stokes @Choppy @LuffleBee
                              Thank you for the review! I'll try to take into account the stuff you said so I can make the later chapters better :) I should also probably edit ch1 lol.
                              ~Jordana (^^)
deutzia deutzia Aug 31, 2010
This is so intense. I'm actually feeling glad I don't have mind powers! Great story. :)
shadowcat11 shadowcat11 Aug 06, 2010
NO! WRITE MORE! Oh, "Continue to Next Part"....I think I'll do that.... =]
Frankie-sama Frankie-sama Jul 31, 2010
I like how your so vivid in you descriptions! Its like I'm actually in your story! Upload soon, and keep up the great work!
AnotherNonsense AnotherNonsense Jul 31, 2010
ouch....i don't want to have broken bones such as that. keep going..
                              i wanna know more...
AnotherNonsense AnotherNonsense Jul 31, 2010
cool and awesome...
                              i just love powers got out of hand,,,go wild!!!