"They call me angel,bi t a a c n f i l w a d???" (ON HOLD)

"They call me angel,bi t a a c n f i l w a d???" (ON HOLD)

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Im A Platypus(I do not do much) By bloodymary911 Updated Aug 29, 2010

"Angel is just a typical type of girl who loves to live a simple and organized life ,she's an honor student,loved by her family and friends....she's contented of what she have....but no love life,,,coz she believe that the right one will come at the right time...only when she discovered she was wrong...Tyler a happy go lucky , easy going rebel type guy and a new transferry arrived and screw her organized life...makes her feel emotions she never encountered before..with Tyler,she is her true self..since then...everything in her life  seems to be up side down and tangled up....."

rosy_1D rosy_1D Nov 18, 2012
Maybe you should have a dictionary and spelling and grammar book near you at all times. This story is more like a 5th grade tale. Punctuation is very exaggerated and the words used are very childish.
kittykarren kittykarren Mar 04, 2011
i couldnt understand it between the NAAAHS and the !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and the ^_^ and the lol! 
                              this is a story, not a FB chat
                              the supposed shy, plain girl is acting way too.... snobby? also, MRS. should be a widow, not a widower.
                              but its a nice idea
bloodymary911 bloodymary911 Aug 07, 2010
@Arracat 
                              THanks for the complement...
                              hope u'll keep on reading my story..
                              
                              uhm...btw..
                              u're story is very intruiging...
                              it kinda sounds like the novel "MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE"  ,by nicholas sparks,,,but u'rs with a twist..and i love it....!!
                              XD
                              __jElLYdR0P__
bloodymary911 bloodymary911 Aug 06, 2010
@aPriLyN 
                              
                              jaja...
                              dont spit it out dude.....
                              
                              thanks 4 d support../
                              
                              
                              wajajaja
                              
                              tc!!!
bloodymary911 bloodymary911 Jul 31, 2010
@KAY5608 
                              
                              
                              you think so?thanks....
                              ill try to come up with better ideas....
                              tc
bloodymary911 bloodymary911 Jul 31, 2010
heres my additional chapter...pls... comment guys..i do hope i could continue this.....wink___wink____