this is a yaoi fan fiction there might be some you know -winks- but there will be a lot of kissing I hope you enjoy this since its my first fan fiction
HAAAN i love your first page ( sorry for my english T^T ) and i love kaneki >//////////////< Good job !
TOKYO GHOUL IS MY ONE OF MY TOP 3 FAV ANIME/ MANGA AND THIS IS A GREAT FANFIC!! Keep up the GREAT work!!
No not really Kaneki. Tons of us Yaoi lovers do it alll the time.
be more descriptive and put the dialogue into descriptive paragraphs instead of just deadpanned sentences your readers will get bored... read one of my books for an example if u need help like the book so far!! cx