The Forsaken(A Thorin Oakenshield Love Story)

The Forsaken(A Thorin Oakenshield Love Story)

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Banished from her village as a small child for being an abomination to her people, Estelmist, half dwarf half fire elf, fled into the night, journeying through Middle Earth until she is found by Gandalf the Gray, who takes her to a friend, who trains her to become a legend. When her caretaker is killed, Estelmist travels alone, becoming known as the Forsaken, for many reasons. When Gandalf finds her and asks her to accompany him and a number of dwarves on a quest, will she refuse? Or will she accept his invitation and fall victim to an emotion foreign to her?

--Undergoing editing as of December 6

  • anenexpectedjourney
  • dwarves
  • elves
  • thedesolationofsmaug
  • thehobbit
  • thorin
  • thorinoakenshield
SageViksn101 SageViksn101 Aug 04, 2017
MORE LIKELY ABANDONING THEM THEN RETURNING ONLY TO FIND OUT THEY'VE GOTTEN THEMSELVES CAPTURED AND HAS TO SAVE THEM THE LEAVING AGAIN THE SAME RHING KEEPS HAPPENING
PennyPony100 PennyPony100 Jul 07, 2017
Head to the right* sorry if I annoy you, I like pointing out mistakes.
SuperNova_Gayness SuperNova_Gayness Dec 17, 2017
I'm really sorry.. But I thought the title said The Foreskin. 😂😂😂 I had to do a doubletake.
LectRD LectRD Oct 16, 2016
I like your story, too. I have written a story based on Tolkien's work, especially on the Hobbit. It's called "Gilraen's adventure". So, read also my story. Thanks.
blackrose_133 blackrose_133 Jul 06, 2016
You need to review your work because your sentences don't make sense
biasgard biasgard Feb 22, 2016
IT'S PERFECT
                              ONE OF THE MOST PERFECT FANFICTIONS THAT I HAVE EVER READ!!!
                              CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!