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The Forsaken(A Thorin Oakenshield Love Story)

The Forsaken(A Thorin Oakenshield Love Story)

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Banished from her village as a small child for being an abomination to her people, Estelmist, half dwarf half fire elf, fled into the night, journeying through Middle Earth until she is found by Gandalf the Gray, who takes her to a friend, who trains her to become a legend. When her caretaker is killed, Estelmist travels alone, becoming known as the Forsaken, for many reasons. When Gandalf finds her and asks her to accompany him and a number of dwarves on a quest, will she refuse? Or will she accept his invitation and fall victim to an emotion foreign to her?

--Undergoing editing as of December 6

Why did she go behind a tree to change? The only other person there is the horse and a horse would care
No he wouldn't. He is 4 foot 6 inches so she would have to be 4 food 3 inches.
                              I'm not trying to be rude but he actually is 4'6". Bilbo is 4 feet.
I don't even know what you were trying to say... launches? A more suitable way of saying it is "The dwarf that spoke earlier stood and shuffled his way in front of Thorin," considering the tight space.
the dwarves would not nod and be chill after she mentions their quest, they would ask questions.
Head to the right* sorry if I annoy you, I like pointing out mistakes.
LectRD LectRD Oct 16, 2016
I like your story, too. I have written a story based on Tolkien's work, especially on the Hobbit. It's called "Gilraen's adventure". So, read also my story. Thanks.