Mafia Merge (ON HOLD SORRY)

Mafia Merge (ON HOLD SORRY)

3K Reads 72 Votes 4 Part Story
Rochelle1897 By Rochelle1897 Updated Jan 17, 2011

Then they merge

DEFendersGirl DEFendersGirl Jan 23, 2011
Good start and good writing only a few errors N spelling and extra words. I will recommend this 2 all my authors 2 recommend 2 all their fans ect. 
Crisann1976 Crisann1976 Dec 04, 2010
This is a good start! I've never read a mafia story before but i'm looking forward to it :)
xxitunes22 xxitunes22 Nov 26, 2010
keep going with it...i'm no expert on grammar and stuff but I am kinda an expert on imaginative stories...try to write down some points on what you want to happen becoz b4 u know it...u come to a point and ur like "shit! What am I gonna write now"
AltheaMurin AltheaMurin Nov 02, 2010
It's a really good start! I voted too, and will keep reading.
Rochelle1897 Rochelle1897 Oct 17, 2010
@PleaseAndThankYou
                              
                              no problem your so big and famous now congrats
DarknessFollows DarknessFollows Aug 18, 2010
This is a really cool story!!! I love it and can't wait to read more!!