A Healer's Fate

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Zeena By NeverTrustaDuck Completed
When Prince Clarion of Kalrona falls ill, Kaylin doesn't think twice about saving his life, even though it will mean her death. Magic is illegal in Kalrona and that is exactly how Kaylin plans to heal the prince. 
    
    What happens when, instead of leading to her execution, Kaylin's actions set in motion a series of events that could end in the demise of the kingdom she calls home? Can she save her home as well, and will she be allowed to live even if she does? 
    
    What's a healer to do but try? 
    
    *Winner of Watty Award 2013 SciFi/Fantasy On the Rise*
When the rabbit first showed up, I thought it would be a twist of Alice in Wonderland, but I'm so glad that it's not.  It's a great start and I can't wait to finish!
I always get excited when I come across a story by the author. It's rather hilarious because I've got this weird tingly feeling in my legs and my toes feel numb.
The start of this book is just amazing. Really, truly amazing
I love the detail and this is a great way to begin a story--really draws a reader in.
Very inaccurate in my opinion, a girl of that age would not be trying to hide what she can do instead she would be trying to show everyone how cool it is and she sounds too grown up nd reasonable which 8 years are not really
You are really good writer and the main reason I stuck with this book was because of the details and your character development.  It was just a bit dry and you have lots more potential that you could use to add excitement.