Unwanted (Urban) book 1

Unwanted (Urban) book 1

24.9K Reads 786 Votes 15 Part Story
Young Writer❤ By Qveen_Bishop Completed

Asia is a troubled teenager who just wants to be loved. Her parents are not in her life and she us currently in foster care. She hates her life and she cant wait to become an adult. She feels as if no one loves her. Will she find what she is looking for? Or is she gonna stay unwanted??
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kenosha2016 kenosha2016 Apr 14, 2016
Love the book. 
                              
                              
                              But when will people realize when you kill yourself you dont go to heaceb
mckenzieinamy mckenzieinamy Jan 18, 2015
Bitch was acting like she was asking for a damn kidney. some type of 'Friend' she is. Love the chapter btw!
mckenzieinamy mckenzieinamy Jan 18, 2015
Okay, I like. Love the plot and everything, but you have to break up your paragraphs. It's a bit too long, other than that, just a little grammar errors but that's about it. I loveee it and I want her to beat her foster mothers ass one good time! lol
BrilliantMind__ BrilliantMind__ Jan 17, 2015
I liked the concept of the story , it was good for the most part. But you should work on spacing your chapters out , and your grammar. & try not to rush everything... Other than that , you good :)