The Day Hope was Murdered

The Day Hope was Murdered

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ash By AwKwardhoMeschooler Updated Aug 13, 2016

Everyone in the quaint little town of Sunbank swore that they had never seen the two sisters Leila and Hope without the other by her side. They were inseparable. That is, until one day, when not only was Hope taken away, but the hope inside of Leila was taken as well. The day Hope was murdered shouldn't be forgotten, and yet somehow, Leila can't remember a thing.

#40 in Mystery/Thriller on 1/21/16

  • depression
  • fiction
  • girl
  • hate
  • hope
  • letters
  • lost
  • mysterious
  • mystery
  • strange
  • suicide
  • teen
  • wattys2015
  • writing
dakitty dakitty Jan 21, 2015
:O This is so amazing so far! You are truly an amazing writer and shouldn't be insecure about your writing. 
                              
                              I love this! ✌ <3 <3 <3
Otionia Otionia Jan 20, 2015
This is amazing!!! ❤️❤️❤️ If you keep writing this, it's going to be splendid!!! You shouldn't be insecure about your writing, it's better than a lot of other people's! :)
Soph_2237 Soph_2237 Jan 18, 2015
This is an awesome Blurb! It sounds like the type of book I dont want to put down. I cant wait to read the rest of it. Ive been waiting for a book like this!
Messeessem Messeessem Jan 18, 2015
Great idea, I love letters! :D No hate letters about cookies though, please. Or sour patches.
CookiePhoenix CookiePhoenix Jan 18, 2015
The blurb is indeed interesting... and the story seems to be very good!
                              An incredibly good start! 
                              Cannot wait to read more! Cheers!
mellifluously- mellifluously- Jan 17, 2015
It's a wonderful start to an amazing story. Don't feel so insecure as you're writing is phenomenal. Plus the idea and meaning behind those hate letters and the saviour is really touching and deep so I'm looking really forward to the coming chapters. 
                              
                              :)