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The Fault in Our Hearts [A NaLu fanfic]

The Fault in Our Hearts [A NaLu fanfic]

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Sky Sykes Walters Vail By _SkyDragon_ Completed

Lucy and Natsu are best friends and they have been ever since they were little! What will happen when she loses all the most important people in her life when she needs them most? She feels like everyone is controlling her and when her Father makes an important decision for her she can't take it any more! Will she flee from her old life to find a better one? Will she ever find someone to care to her?
Sequel: Broken

[A/N: If you are going to read this, can you please comment on the line when you find a typo/spelling or grammar error. It would help me improve the book immensely without me having to spend the time going through every chapter again because I have a LOT of school work to do and it would save so much time, thank you in advance]

ClarissaStanley8 ClarissaStanley8 Apr 22, 2016
I felt a little blush rising when I saw 6-year old Natsu...KAWAII OVERLOAD!!
FirePhoenixFlameAxe FirePhoenixFlameAxe Apr 12, 2016
Oh ok pretty shady not pretty because anyone that hangs out with Flare is one thing and thats carzy
babeslovebless babeslovebless Oct 14, 2016
Im still very mad about the whole cheating thing.  I don't care if she saved her I still really wanted Lucy to get a whip wrap it around her hair and shock her while swinging her till she gives In and even after make i think it was Virgo cut all her hair completely
RoseTyler967 RoseTyler967 Oct 22, 2016
Just wanted to put in this should be "you're" as in "you are" :)