The Fault in Our Hearts [A NaLu fanfic]

The Fault in Our Hearts [A NaLu fanfic]

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Sky Sykes Walters Vail By _SkyDragon_ Completed

Lucy and Natsu are best friends and they have been ever since they were little! What will happen when she loses all the most important people in her life when she needs them most? She feels like everyone is controlling her and when her Father makes an important decision for her she can't take it any more! Will she flee from her old life to find a better one? Will she ever find someone to care to her?
Sequel: Broken

[A/N: If you are going to read this, can you please comment on the line when you find a typo/spelling or grammar error. It would help me improve the book immensely without me having to spend the time going through every chapter again because I have a LOT of school work to do and it would save so much time, thank you in advance]

life4nalu life4nalu Jul 29
am i the only one that can actually see this whole section happening
I feel like Natsu might die, and she'll say something like, "Stop pretending! We made a deal!"
Just a side note, it would look a little bit more professional is you put a '~' instead of multiple letters. :)
LEMISI LEMISI Jun 19
I got so paranoid when I saw my name in your story I started to look around the park to make sure I wasn't being watched
You know... this part reminds me of a Kirisuna moment in SAO... Anyone else get it?
babeslovebless babeslovebless Oct 14, 2016
I mean like she woke up with you on top of her.  No homo you little nasties