Lucifer's Ring

Lucifer's Ring

7.7K Reads 180 Votes 8 Part Story
PureOfHeart By PureOfHeart Updated Jul 09, 2012

All Estelle Atkins wants to do is leave her home and never come back. Her father is controlling, her mother is gone, and a mysterious man has been following her ever since her 16th birthday. After disobeying her father for the last time, he decides to send her away to her Aunt and Uncle’s in a small town called Painswick. Estelle sees this as a chance to finally break free and escape her problems back home. She learns dating tips from her soon-to-be married cousin, gets to explore the town freely and begins to feel as if she is a normal person like everyone else. But what do you do when the issues you try so hard to escape haunt you wherever you go?

RenaFlower77 RenaFlower77 Sep 20, 2011
nice start. got my attention. I shall put your story in my library and so I can keep reading it ^^
ESummerlee ESummerlee Sep 19, 2011
Oh, thats a good prologue, very short but still intriguing. (I'm obviously reading on xD)
PureOfHeart PureOfHeart Jul 28, 2011
@peacesign1 haha ty :) ya, i guess I'm just being a hard critic on myself lol
PureOfHeart PureOfHeart Jun 19, 2011
@libertyk Ya it is really short but that's just way it of happened. I want people to assume and question. I find it makes a book more interesting ;)
PureOfHeart PureOfHeart Jun 16, 2011
@Morgenstern Ty :) school is finishing up really soon so I'll have much more time to write and finish the next chapter
PureOfHeart PureOfHeart Jun 12, 2011
@peculiarpianist tyvm!  Hope u read the next chapter when it comes out!