His Beloved *Editing*

His Beloved *Editing*

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In a flash, he's in front of me "C-Caleb," My voice is a whisper. He doesn't respond as he leans closer to my neck.

Closer.

Closer.

Closer.

His breath is now on my neck and I'm completely frozen in place as he pushes me against my only escape route.

"C-Caleb, it's- it's me Ari..Ariana, please think a-about what you're doing," I stutter, but I'm cut off....
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Ariana, a depressed human girl, has little to nothing going for her. Then suddenly something changes... a new figure comes sprinting into the picture. 

He's far from normal. There's something about him that doesn't seem human... regardless, he fights his way through the toughest obstacles, one step at a time. 

But as darkness approaches, a faceless entity on the loose, he feels his control slowly slip. Can he protect Ariana or will she slip from his fingertips.

  • alone
  • broken-home
  • dreams
  • escape
  • evil
  • lies
  • love
  • runaway
  • soulmates
  • torn
Great beginning! Really looking forward to seeing where this goes. 👏🏻👍
É estranho meu nome é Amanda e dou juz ao significado do meu nome!!!
justprutha justprutha Mar 04, 2016
I like your story , and as a matter of fact I feel too interested to quit. Hope it will continue to appeal us.
DemonStalkers DemonStalkers Mar 06, 2016
IRIS OMFG MY PARENTS WEDDING SONG ♥ THE FEELS ARE TO STRONG
kassykarson kassykarson Jun 05, 2016
Whoa! Cool twist I really thought the 'bangs' where meant to be gun shot noises😊
DamonKiss DamonKiss Nov 09, 2016
😂😂😂😂😂😂 Dracula?! Really!! 😂😂😂😂😂 nice one,l laughed my as* off!!!!