The Merman (Under Review)

The Merman (Under Review)

64.3K Reads 2.2K Votes 11 Part Story
Izzy By IzzyGale Updated Aug 15, 2014

Anise gets kidnapped from her family during a holiday in Tenerife. This mystery man takes her to the mystical city know to us as 'Atlantis'. Anise is, of course, completely unwilling to accept this fact and does all in her power to escape. But how long can she resist Eric's tantalizing sensuality and potent enchantment?

tiger_dm tiger_dm May 02, 2016
Nice story and funny characters, however I am not overly fond of your over use of exclamation marks.
tiger_dm tiger_dm May 02, 2016
Nice story and funny characters, however I am not overly fond of your over use of exclamation marks.
Lovelymagic04 Lovelymagic04 Nov 04, 2016
i love the sand as long as its not in my shoes.i love to walk in it bare foot.
                              if i had to walk in the sand with my shoes i think i have the biggest tantrum in the world. that involves crying,screaming,shouting at the top of my lungs oh and yeah screaming.
PatriciaElliott8 PatriciaElliott8 Apr 04, 2016
Haha, my kids did the same when we were walking around Yellowstone National Park.
TurnupDecent TurnupDecent Dec 02, 2016
I am sorry I feel like I am being a nusince. I really love the story ,but the spelling mistakes.
Lovelymagic04 Lovelymagic04 Nov 04, 2016
i hate to get sand in my shoes .because it feels weird and it rubs my bottom of my feet raw.
                              sometimes