when hope moves to crystal high she doesnt know that theres on bad boy waiting for her.
Hi, I saw your story in 'discoveries'. There are errors (spelling, grammar etc), not to mention the cliche alarm scene. All good tho, I just wanted to recommend Hemingway App, or anything like it. Just copy paste and it'll tell you what's wrong spelling wise. It's really good, honest :L
Conceited means self centered/arrogant by the way, I think you mean self-conscious.