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The past will not stay hidden (The Hobbit/Thorin Fanfiction)

The past will not stay hidden (The Hobbit/Thorin Fanfiction)

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GeekElfofMirkwood By GeekElfofMirkwood Completed

Once a long time ago there was a kingdom of magical creatures, wizards. The wizards were immortal beings, and each wizard had a unique gift.  One day a child was born with eyes which had a ring of silver around the edge of the iris. She was a silver wizard. The silver wizard was one of the rarest races of wizards, it had been over a thousand years since a silver wizard existed..

WhitePhenix WhitePhenix Jul 04, 2016
No it is great so far, the plot idea is too. It's just last year my teacher told me; every time a character has a piece of dialogue after another's, start it on a new line. I hope this doesn't sound rude and it make sense, just ask me if you want to clarify.
Wabbit_Swayin Wabbit_Swayin Oct 18, 2016
Omg... I can see many things developing out of this and they are all good... Well done on a great intro
Katie_Wolf_DH Katie_Wolf_DH Oct 29, 2015
It seems a very cool book:) can't wait to read more. I wish I had sliver eyes:P