Jia had never expected to return to California, to move from a quiet English town to the buzzing Beverly Hills, where money and beauty is all that matters, where partying on the beach till 3 in the morning is normal. More than anything, she was not expecting to find her best friend, still living in the same town, still acting the same, just Gabriel. But, Jia has a secret. No-one knows the real reason why she moved back to Beverly Hills, that her boyfriend got too serious, that it got to a point where he would threaten her to such an extent that Jia couldn't leave the house. She was all over the news, everyone knew who she was, which was why she had to move back to Beverly Hills, where no one would look further than money, and beauty.
all the leaves are brown 
                                    and the sky is gray
                                    I've been for a walk 
                                    on a Winters day 
                                    I'd be safe and warm 
                                    if I was in L.A
                                    California Dreamin'
                                    on such a Winters day!!!!
                                    (I had to sorry xD)
really good chapter, could someone please make me a few cover stories for my books, I will give you full credit
My name is Jia too!! OMG I was freaking out when I saw this most people spell it with a G and im so happy you wrote it with a J. And I know this isnt for me but my name isnt really popular so when it was used I felt really happy! N if ur reading this thank u!!
I love how they meet again! Already really liking the story :)
I like it a lot! I think that you could put more about the terrain of where Jia is. You could describe the area more. I think that would help it along, but other wise a great start!
The Hogwarts joke cracked me up! The humor is amazing! This is a great beginning! And I definitely feel sorry for Jia since everyone spells her name wrong... Voted <3