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The Concept of Perfection

The Concept of Perfection

757K Reads 24.2K Votes 27 Part Story
Kierra By kierra97 Completed

After an accident claims her twin’s life, Addy’s “perfect life” falls apart. She had the greatest friends, the most understanding family, the perfect best friend who’s also her twin brother, but she lost everything in one snap. Her perfect life comes to an end. If that wasn’t bad enough, she is forced to live in Blue Cove, a small town in the eastern coast of California with an aunt she barely knew existed. 
	Efforts on trying not to make things harder, she pretends to be the person she was before all the changes happened. Fun, outgoing, and cheerful. But in time, she realized she really wasn’t pretending anymore… unless it’s in front of him. 
	Now here’s Nate. The completely annoying and irritating guy from her new neighborhood. Nate—the flaw in her life. The guy with the shell she couldn’t break. A person who might just have some depth he wouldn’t show. His cheerfulness runs on the surface, but what runs deeper? 
	A story about loss, love, and learning as Addy realizes how much she was missing up until her brother’s death.

DancingInTheStorm17 DancingInTheStorm17 Sep 01, 2013
Really loved it!! But just did Adrian and Vince die?
AngiePonce AngiePonce Aug 09, 2012
I liked the story but it didnt explain how Adrian died, and Vince too, even though there was a slight mention about a "brawl".Out of 5 stars I give it 5 stars. Good read!
shaymaz shaymaz Dec 19, 2011
Heyyy.I've read, voted and loved every single chapter. Seriously, this story is so great... I'm kind of embarrassed to be fourteen too. I don't write but I love to read and this is practically perfect. Keep up the ridiculously awesome work!! <3 <3
Ivinsky Ivinsky Dec 17, 2011
Perfection! I <3 everything about this concept honestly. The title is perfect, the plot, and the characters!
LTHughes LTHughes Nov 21, 2011
I'm def going to continue reading this is amazing :) can't wait to read more!
AnotherNonsense AnotherNonsense Oct 08, 2011
Wow this had me at the twins. Its beautifully written. But what i like about it was the idea of having a flaw in her perfect life. This story is very promising. I'll keep my fingers crossed..^^ thanks