Just so you know,Mabel and Dipper are 15
Hehe~ Just “ONE” time 😏
I love this and I love this ship
It's need spaces after each comma, it stresses me out so much 😂
Too quick pacing. Slow down a bit. Make the emotion simmer a little bit.
You should make paragraphs so it'll be easier for the reader :)
well,it was a lot of feelings,and also dipper is a douchbag,why check your sister's diary?!
wow the whlole, hey I like u a lot and not in that sisterly kind of way thing came really quick an suddenly