Just One Time

Just One Time

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HereIsFanfic By HereIsFanfic Updated Mar 04, 2016

Just so you know,Mabel and Dipper are 15

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Hehe~ Just “ONE” time 😏
                              I love this and I love this ship
galaxyg123 galaxyg123 Jan 28
It's need spaces after each comma, it stresses me out so much 😂
ConduitAuthor ConduitAuthor Jul 26, 2015
Too quick pacing. Slow down a bit. Make the emotion simmer a little bit.
kittykat984 kittykat984 May 07, 2015
You should make paragraphs so it'll be easier for the reader :)
HereIsFanfic HereIsFanfic Jan 25, 2015
well,it was a lot of feelings,and also dipper is a douchbag,why check your sister's diary?!
mysterywhisper305 mysterywhisper305 Jan 25, 2015
wow the whlole, hey I like u a lot and not in that sisterly kind of way thing came really quick an suddenly