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Behind Barbie's Smile (under revision)

Behind Barbie's Smile (under revision)

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Erica Lynn By EriBear Updated May 22

Natalia has been rich her whole life. To get ahead all she had to do was use her family name: Fairfield. Her father, a movie star, and her mother, a retired model turned fashion designer and recruiter. Natalia was used to being the envy of every person she crossed. Natalia's smart, popular, rich, loved, and beautiful, and perfect. She is basically a barbie in human form. But even barbie has her secrets.

NataliaBritt NataliaBritt Oct 09, 2016
So, this is an interesting introduction.
                              I like the writing style and I didn't see that many mistakes, which is hard to come by on this site. 
                              I'm sort stoked your main character's name is the same as mine haha.
                              I'm curious what her story is. 
EriBear EriBear Jun 05, 2012
@lstornelli27 Thanks. I hope you like the story. I had a hard time writing the prologue at first.
kissing-in-neverland kissing-in-neverland Jun 05, 2012
Really cool start! I think it was a great way to inform the reader before they enter the story! Good job! *voted*