ON HOLD Perfect Picture ON HOLD

ON HOLD Perfect Picture ON HOLD

13 Part Story 2.7K Reads 78 Votes
Moriah By Moriah2Hot Updated Dec 31, 2011

Darren and Taylor have been friends since kindergarten.  They both like each other but don't know it.  Let's get it straight Darren is popular Taylor is a nerd.  Darren doesn't want to be seen with well... you know... a nerd.  Let's see what happens!!!

moosechester moosechester Nov 24, 2011 03:26AM
It's good, but the smiley faces don't belong in the story, so I suggest you take them out. That's all I've got. Great start!
momamoose momamoose Jul 11, 2011 06:58PM
it's good, bot not my preferred kind of story, sorry, I voted because I know if I liked Romance stories I'd like it
thegirly1 thegirly1 Jun 08, 2011 11:24PM
Hey moriah this is isabel you know ur best friend :) well anyway I LOVE itt!
Moriah2Hot Moriah2Hot May 29, 2011 11:29PM
Does anyone read this story?  Should I continue? 2 more votes an I'll continue! And 2 more comments!