The Surfer's Heart *Process of Being Edited*

The Surfer's Heart *Process of Being Edited*

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Holly Johnson By ChicChique88 Completed

Being one of the best surfer's in Hawaii is a title that Brooke Perez is determined to broaden. She wants to be the best surfer in the world. When a worldwide surfing competition is taking place but minutes from her house on North Shore Oahu, she feels there's almost no other choice but to compete. But when her best friend is at risk of getting her heart broken, Brooke finds it a hard task to focus on the competition.

**Hey guys, I would just like to inform you that yes, this is a complete piece, but I am in the process of editing and revising the entire story. Thanks for you patience!**

NerdHerd NerdHerd May 05
Oh she got back from Africa? Nice to see that she got a chance to visit every single country in the North, South, East, West and Central parts of Africa.
I know that some people might disagree, but it's actually spelled with an 'okina. Or an apostrophe. So it's Hawai'i, not Hawaii...
- - Jun 05
This is a really intriguing first chapter! Can't wait to read more!
wayfaringlostsoul wayfaringlostsoul Nov 11, 2014
This is good! Great first chapter. I'm getting interested, especially since it's set in my dream island, Oahu 
VillaView VillaView Sep 03, 2014
Maybe she isn't as passionate of surfing no more maybe that's why she's been bad lately?
elvionina elvionina Sep 05, 2011
Got hooked in alright. Because of the AWESOME cover and title!