I have tons of poems in this group, and i hope you can connect with any of them :) enjoy!
aww thanks! and yeah i wanted to spread the words out, so you could get the full effect of each one..and not combine them into one sentence and just be a mix of words
Oh that was totally great! I love the way you wrote the poem with the "walking, talking, thinking..." going down the page. I thought it made the poem more powerful*!! This poem is great!
+ I voted!!
@lolipoparcade yeah like crying may have a dual meaning like happy or sad or angry kinda
So true, on the outside some ppl look perfect. but like you said just a screen, on the inside they could be sad, evil, angered anything at all
thanks! sometimes i just like to question things in my poem, it makes it more mysterious and the reader wondering the answer
@etherealswansong well dreams are so mysterious sometimes, but they can be your wishes too :) anywayss thankss :)