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Make a Wish... (poems)

Make a Wish... (poems)

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lolipoparcade By lolipoparcade Updated Apr 05, 2011

I have tons of poems in this group, and i hope you can connect with any of them :) enjoy!

lolipoparcade lolipoparcade Aug 20, 2010
                              aww thanks!  and yeah i wanted to spread the words out, so you could get the full effect of each one..and not combine them into one sentence and just be a mix of words
Sublime_Rivers Sublime_Rivers Aug 19, 2010
Oh that was totally great! I love the way you wrote the poem with the "walking, talking, thinking..." going down the page. I thought it made the poem more powerful*!! This poem is great! 
                              + I voted!!
SaniaIkbal SaniaIkbal Aug 18, 2010
@lolipoparcade yeah like crying may have a dual meaning like happy or sad or angry kinda 
lolipoparcade lolipoparcade Aug 16, 2010
                              So true, on the outside some ppl look perfect. but like you said just a screen, on the inside they could be sad, evil, angered anything at all
lolipoparcade lolipoparcade Aug 16, 2010
                              thanks! sometimes i just like to question things in my poem, it makes it more mysterious and the reader wondering the answer
lolipoparcade lolipoparcade Jul 20, 2010
@etherealswansong  well dreams are so mysterious sometimes, but they can be your wishes too :) anywayss thankss :)