Surviving ➳ bellamy blake

Surviving ➳ bellamy blake

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Reina's and Bellamy's story continues. This time, instead of the Grounders, they face the Mountain Men.  
Sequel to Survivor!

 [Season 2]

I suck at descriptions so bear with me.

  • bellamy
  • bellamyblake
  • clarke
  • finn
  • murphy
  • raven
  • the100
The paragraph would sound better read out loud if you deleted her the first time and left her just after crouching down to.  It sounds a little bit repetitive if you keep both hers.
It says in the first paragraph: A creek can be seen from the distance, when it should say: A creek can be seen in the distance. I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!!!!!!! I think you are a great writer and I hope your writing career takes you to wonderful places.
I think in this paragraph Lincoln should say: I'll be back with the antidote as soon as I can, instead of: Be back with the antidote as soon as I can because if you say it with be back it sounds like Lincoln is a modern civilian instead of a enemy battling warrior.
- - Dec 20, 2015
I have a Bellamy Blake Love Story. It only has 1 Chapter but I will update every day if I get 5 comments. Thanks.