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One Direction smut

One Direction smut

42.4K Reads 120 Votes 8 Part Story
muminahmalik By muminahmalik Completed

im new but if theres one thing im good at its writing smut so inbox me ur requests and ill get started :)

lovemahharreh lovemahharreh 6 days ago
Maybe you should try and make some more punctuations. And (" ") when the head caracters point of view too. Just trying to help, and you ofcourse dont have to do it. I really like the story. And you can only get better by practising so keep writing you're good at it!! All the love xx
WhiskersTheCat3 WhiskersTheCat3 Jun 27, 2016
                              Little black dress
                              Midnight memories 
                              (That's all I caught)
JonnaSmiley JonnaSmiley Feb 12
There aren't a lot of punctuation but it's okay :) you're new so nobody expects you to be perfect. I love it so far though by the way :D
WhiskersTheCat3 WhiskersTheCat3 Jun 27, 2016
Oh my gosh. The song reference puns. Hilarious. Got a kick out me
Directioner6911 Directioner6911 Jul 15, 2016
through the dark
                              little black dress
                              midnight memories
                              I CANT...