FALLEN

FALLEN

880 Reads 35 Votes 4 Part Story
XxtakxX By XxtakxX Updated Jan 14, 2015

After a hard experience of loss , tears, heartbreak and incredible guilt, Anna decided that it was time for her to start a new life , to give herself a new chance, therefore she moved far away from home , from all the memories that hunted her to study in West Coast University in California , she hoped that it will be a chance for her to forget the past or at least to not remember as much , she knew it wasn't that easy especially with the person she became but never in a million years has she imagined that through this journey she 'll come across every possible emotion out-there especially when a certain Bad boy came into the picture a bad boy with a dark secret that will possibly destroy Anna's hope for a new start.

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  • anna
  • bad
  • boy
  • dark
  • emotions
  • fallen
  • friendship
  • humor
  • newstart
  • past
  • secrets
  • teenfiction
isabelleandsadie isabelleandsadie Mar 23, 2015
Your writing is brilliant!! I love your descriptions, like "my lunch almost came back up my throat". You're amazing at describing setting and making it seem like your characters are real. I really love it
isabelleandsadie isabelleandsadie Mar 23, 2015
This sounds really cool! Also you're trilingual, that's literally amazing. I only speak one language but I'm trying to learn a second and it's soooo hard! 
CacauFlower CacauFlower Jan 16, 2015
End phrase after born and Astarte another with the after all.
CacauFlower CacauFlower Jan 16, 2015
The pain will ease as time goes by/ the pain will ease with time. Would be better.
CacauFlower CacauFlower Jan 16, 2015
End the phrase here and begin the new one with the "" phrase.
CacauFlower CacauFlower Jan 14, 2015
You are quite good at descriptions and making us feel and see things as she does.  You definitely made me curious to understand more of what is happening to her . So good job at keeping the mystery