Remember me, Forget me, Miss me

Remember me, Forget me, Miss me

27.3K Reads 649 Votes 14 Part Story
Emily By solelyme Updated Nov 02, 2012

I beat it once, but that was only the battle. Now its the war, and I can't win. Cancer, I surrender.   When life takes a turn for the worst and you find out you have terminal cancer, what do you do? In Melody's opinion, you don't. She was accepting dying, until Lucius. Then she questions what shes doing, and if it was the right choice.

charliees charliees Dec 09, 2010
hey, youre story is really great, sorry ive taken so long to read it :) i am definetly voting, also i was wondering if you could please read my story itts called The Assassins Daughter. Feel free to comment with your opinion or even vote :) thanks <3
smileforme101 smileforme101 Nov 24, 2010
i adore your writing form hower the use of "I" is a tad over used. my advice for this part would just be to find a different pronoun.(:
rosesandquills rosesandquills Nov 24, 2010
Woah. First time reading tragedy. It's good. Really good. And lol at Ace&Queenie. Such unique names. I wonder if their parents are nuts? lol
isabella19 isabella19 Oct 22, 2010
It seems like this is going to be a really good story. Voting!
tacocat tacocat Sep 19, 2010
Oh... 
                              
                              Sorry I just can't read this right now..
                              Someone in my family had cancer..
                              
                              But you're a good writer tho :)
                              
                              Would you mind reading my story My Last Rain and tell me what you think?
                              
                              Thxalot! I appreciate it :]
Ryuzaki_L Ryuzaki_L Sep 19, 2010
wow nice story
                              excellent work on the detailing
                              so sad though
                              have to read the next part!!!